XANIOTH
Jan 22 2006, 04:11 PM
Im not a big fan of love poems though your one was sort of a lustful erotic horror, pretty good!!,
the only poem i ever wrote on love was this one i wrote a few years back....
Natures indulgence,
genuine unconditional satisfaction,
appeal attracts minds react,
asthetic love interaction,
grows bitter sweet,
emotionally blinded swept off feet.
Romantically enhanced,
memories moments laugh tearful eye,
loyalty trust faith lust,
infatuated sent from above,
loneliness stale mere fairytale,
upon you ponder real or blunder?
Zeus to Aphrodite Romeo or Incubus,
Philander or Juliet seeking respect.
Affectionate degenerate variable varietys,
mood swings that song you sing,
time for regrets?........
aspire to desire,
strive to acquire.
ImpossibleAsk*
Nov 6 2006, 02:28 PM
Be delicate and cautious in the use
And choice of words; nor shall you fail of praise
When nicely joining two known words you raise
A third unknown. A new-discovered theme